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2
as darkness / into evening as it
1st

69
THE REST
:
1st
in
Poetry
[Chicago, Ill.] 146.6 (Sept. 1985): 347; in
IAML
174.

1—3
Clouds hang loosely over this mountain
 
range behind my house. In a while
 
the light will go and the wind come up
1st
18
high blue / dying
1st

70
SLIPPERS
:
1st
in
Raccoon
[Memphis, Tenn.] 24—5 (May 1987):176; in
IAML
198.

6
told of / told
1st
21
Then called / Then AUP
24—5
it has moment. Those lost slippers. And the discovery
 
that brought a cry of delight.
1st

71
ASIA
:
1st
in
Ploughshares
[Emerson College] 11.4 (1985): 78—9; in
Northwest Review
[Univ. of Oregon, Eugene] 24.1 (1986): 61,
IAML
203—4.

27—8
[no stanza break in
1st
]
30
rail, / rail
IAML
36
mind / minds
IAML
37—8
of the horses
 
where it is always Asia.
1st, Northwest Review

72
THE GIFT
:
1st
in
Seneca Review
[Hobart and William Smith Colleges] 15.2 (1986): 50—1; in
IAML
205—6.

8
the airport / Galitea Airport
1st
9
left / left there
1st
15
even a / even
1st
21
onto the / onto
1st
27—8
sat in the bathroom close to the sink. If I shaved,
 
as I did one morning, the pan of water bubbled
1st
30—1
I sat on the bed, dressed, clean-shaven, drinking
 
coffee, putting off what I’d decided to do. Finally,
1st
36—8
this month. He didn’t have it.“It’s okay,” I said.
 
“I understand.” And I did. We talked
 
a little more, then hung up. He didn’t have it.
1st
52
moves / moves me,
1st
A New Path to the Waterfall

First edition: New York, NY: Atlantic Monthly Press, 1989. Introduction by Tess Gallagher. Publication date: 15 June 1989.

First signed, limited edition: “Of the first edition of
A New Path to the Waterfall
two hundred copies have been specially printed and bound. These books are signed by Tess Gallagher and numbered 1 to 200” (limitation leaf).

First paperback edition: New York, NY: Atlantic Monthly Press, 1989. Publication date: May 1990.

First English edition: London: Collins Harvill, 1989. Publication date: 21 Sept. 1989.

Dedication:
Tess. Tess. Tess. Tess

Epigraph: “Gift” by Czeslaw Milosz,
The Collected Poems 1931—1987
(New York, NY:Ecco Press, 1988) 251.

Copy-text: First edition, first printing, collated and corrected against later editions and printings.

Small-press sources and separate publications:
NK, WI, ANTSM, F, TD, His Bathrobe Pockets Stuffed with Notes
(Raven, 1988),
Looking for Work/Downstream
(n.p., 1988),
The Painter and the Fish
(Ewert, 1988),
The Toes
(Ewert, 1988).

1
WET PICTURE
(
JAROSLAV SEIFERT
):
The Selected Poetry of Jaroslav Seifert
(New York, NY: Macmillan, 1986) 37.

2
TWO WORLDS
:
1st
in
Midwest Quarterly
[Pittsburg (Kans.) State Univ.] 14.1 (Oct. 1972): 63; in
TD
15.

3
SMOKE AND DECEPTION
(
CHEKHOV
): from “The Privy Councillor”,
The Wife and Other Stories,
vol. 5 of
The Tales of Chekhov,
trans. Constance Garnett (1918; New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1985) 237.

4
IN A GREEK ORTHODOX CHURCH NEAR DAPHNE
:
1st
in
South Dakota Review
[Univ. of South Dakota] 10.4 (Winter 1972—3): 88; in
TD
16. All lines begin with capital letters in
1st
and
TD.

7—8
Ruined walls.
 
Wind rises to meet the evening.
1st, TD

5
TRANSFORMATION
: in
WI
38—9.

Title: “The Transformation”
WI

19—23
Later we play the entire film
 
again and again.
 
I see the woman keep
 
falling and getting up, falling
 
and getting up, Arabs
 
evil-eyeing the camera.
 
I see myself striking
WI
27
Holy Land / Holyland
WI
32
with / like
WI
37—8
My grin turns to salt.
WI

6
THREAT
: in
WI
33. All lines begin with capital letters in
WI.

2
it / it,
WI

7
CONSPIRATORS
: in
WI
11. All lines begin with capital letters in
WI.

2
woods, / woods
WI
8
three / 3
WI

8
THIS WORD LOVE
:
1st
in
Poet and Critic
[Iowa State Univ.] 7.1 (1972): 2; in
ANTSM
44. In
1st
RC’s assigned critics are Simon Perchik and Christine Zawadiwsky.

Title: “This Word
Love
” 1st,
ANTSM

2
I love you
/ I love you
1st, ANTSM
10
my arm throws no shadow even,
1st, ANTSM
11
it too is consumed
 
with light
1st
14
heavy and shakes itself,
1st
 
heavy and shakes itself
ANTSM
15—16
and begins to eat
 
through this paper.
 
Listen.
1st, ANTSM
17—21
[omitted in
1st, ANTSM
]

9
DON’T RUN
(
CHEKHOV
): from “A Visit to Friends”,
The Unknown Chekhov
, vol. 14 of
The Tales of Chekhov
, trans. Avrahm Yarmolinsky (1954; New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1987) 223.

10
WOMAN BATHING
:
1st
in
West Coast Review
[Simon Fraser Univ.] 2.1 (Spring 1967): 9; in
NK
[19]. All lines begin with capital letters in
1st
and
NK.
In
1st
and
NK
there is an additional line after line 7:

 
A few minutes only?

In
1st
and
NK
a stanza break follows this line. The two resulting eight-line stanzas are printed side by side.

10
Time is a mountain lion. 1st, NK

11
THE NAME
(
TOMAS TRANSTRÖMER
):
Selected Poems 1954—1986
(New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1987) 93.

12
LOOKING FOR WORK
[2]: in
WI
16; see
“Looking for Work” [1]
in
F
; separately published with
“Downstream”
as a broadside (n.p.: 1988). The
ANP
version is identical with that in
WI.
The broadside, which otherwise agrees with
WI
and
ANP
, lacks the comma ending line 6 (likely a typographical error).

1
I have / I’ve
F
13
door, / door.
F
14
gleaming. / They are gleaming.
F

13
THE WORLD BOOK SALESMAN
:
1st
in
Levee
[Sacramento State Univ.] 2.2 (Jan. 1967): 5; in
Prairie Schooner
[Univ. of Nebraska] 17.2 (Summer 1968): 122—3,
NK
[28],
WI
42. Lexically, all four versions agree. Punctuation and spelling differ slightly in each text, as does lineation in
1st.
Illustrations:

3
turns he / turns, he
1st, Prairie Schooner, NK, WI
7
world; / world:
NK
10
it is all there,
 
all there
1st
12
crack / crack,
1st, Prairie Schooner, NK, WI
13
slam. / slam
Prairie Schooner
20
art. / art
NK

14
THE TOES
:
1st
in
Poetry
[Chicago, Ill.] 151.2 (Oct.—Nov. 1987): 27—8; separately published in a limited edition (Concord, NH: William B. Ewert, 1988).

24—5
Are these really
my
toes?
 
Have they forgotten
Ewert

15
THE MOON, THE TRAIN
:
1st
in
Zyzzyva
[San Francisco, Calif.] 4.4 (Winter 1988): 63—4.

3
sanitoriums / sanitariums
1st
13—14
pair is ahead? Who is keeping score? The ball goes back and
 
forth, back and forth. Everyone seems to be playing perfectly,
1st
38
Once more / Again
1st

16
TWO CARRIAGES
(
CHEKHOV
): from “The Wife”,
The Wife and Other Stories
, vol. 5 of
The Tales of Chekhov
, trans. Constance M. Garnett (1918; New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1985) 64—5, 67.

17
MIRACLE
:
1st
in
Frank
[Paris] 8—9 (Winter 1987—8): 16—18.

91
be / be,
1st
92
but they’re not, dead. And that’s part of
1st

18
MY WIFE
:
1st
in
New: American and Canadian Poetry
[Trumansburg, NY] 7 (Sept. 1968): 12; in
TD
14. All lines begin with capital letters in
1st
and
TD.

19
AFTER THE FIRE
(
CHEKHOV
): from “Peasants”,
The Unknown Chekhov
, vol. 14 of
The Tales of Chekhov
, trans. Avrahm Yarmolinsky (1954; New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1987) 187.

20
from
A JOURNAL OF SOUTHERN RIVERS
(
CHARLES WRIGHT
):
The World of the Ten Thousand Things: Poems 1980—1990
(New York, NY: Farrar Straus Giroux, 1990) 224.

21
SONGS IN THE DISTANCE
(
CHEKHOV
): from “Peasants”,
The Unknown Chekhov
, vol. 14 of
The Tales of Chekhov
, trans. Avrahm Yarmolinsky (1954; New York, NY: Ecco Press, 1987) 174—5.

22
WHAT YOU NEED TO KNOW FOR FISHING
(
STEPHEN OLIVER
): from
Scenes and Recollections of Fly Fishing in Northumberland, Cumberland and Westmoreland
(London: Chapman and Hall, 1834).

23
OYNTMENT TO ALURE FISH TO THE BAIT
(
JAMES CHETHAM
): from
The Angler’s Vade Mecum
(London: Thomas Bassett, 1681).

24
THE STURGEON
:
1st
in
Ball State University Forum
[Muncie, Ind.] 8.4 (Autumn 1967): 9—10; in
TD
9—11.

1
flat side / flatside
1st, TD
, AUP
12
itself / himself
1st
13
to large, freshwater rivers,
1st, TD
14
100 / a 100 AUP
 
and takes a 100 years getting around
 
to its first mating.
1st, TD
14—15
[no stanza break in
1st, TD
]
17
that weighed / weighed
1st, TD
34
of the Yukon River
 
in Alaska
1st, TD
39
that went / went
1st, TD
40
at Celilo Falls
 
on the Columbia River.
1st, TD
42
a story then
 
about 3 men he knew long ago in Oregon
1st, TD
52—5
even then —
 
just my father there beside me
 
leaning on his arms over the railing,
 
staring,
 
the two of us staring up
 
at that great dead fish,
 
and that marvelous story of his,
1st, TD
56
surfacing, / all surfacing
1st, TD
 
       surfacing AUP

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