Authors: Sharon Creech
I guess it does
look like a poem
when you see it
typed up
like that.
But I think maybe
it would look better
if there was more space
between the lines.
Like how I wrote it
the first time.
And I liked the picture
of the yellow dog
you put beside it.
But that's not how
my yellow dog
looked.
I really really really
did NOT get
the pasture poem
you read today.
I mean:
somebody's going out
to the pasture
to clean the spring
and to get
the little tottery calf
while he's out there
and he isn't going
to be gone long
and he wants YOU
(who is YOU?)
to come too.
I mean REALLY.
And you said that
Mr. Robert Frost
who wrote
about the pasture
was also the one
who wrote about
those snowy woods
and the miles to go
before he sleepsâ
well!
I think Mr. Robert Frost
has a little
too
much
time
on his
hands.
Remember the wheelbarrow poem
you read
the first week
of school?
Maybe the wheelbarrow poet
was just
making a picture
with words
and
someone elseâ
like maybe his teacherâ
typed it up
and then people thought
it was a poem
because
it looked like one
typed up like that.
And maybe
that's the same thing
that happened with
Mr. Robert Frost.
Maybe he was just
making pictures with words
about the snowy woods
and the pastureâ
and his teacher
typed them up
and they
looked
like poems
so people thought
they were poems.
Like how you did
with the blue-car things
and reading-the-small-poems thing.
On the board
typed up
they look like
poems
and the other kids
are looking at them
and they think
they really are
poems
and they
are all saying
Who wrote that?
We were going for a drive
and my father said
We won't be gone longâ
You come too
and so I went
and we drove and drove
until we stopped at a
red brick building
with a sign
in blue letters
ANIMAL PROTECTION SHELTER.
And inside we walked
down a long cement path
past cages
with all kinds of
dogs
big and small
fat and skinny
some of them
hiding in the corner
but most of them
bark-bark-barking and
jumping up
against the wire cage
as we walked past
as if they were saying
Me! Me! Choose me!
I'm the best one!
And that's where we saw
the yellow dog
standing against the cage
with his paws curled
around the wire
and his long red tongue
hanging out
and his big black eyes
looking a little sad
and his long tail
wag-wag-wagging
as if he were saying
Me me me! Choose me!
And we did.
We chose him.
And in the car
he put his head
against my chest
and wrapped his paws
around my arm
as if he were saying
Thank you thank you thank you.
And the other dogs
in the cages
get killed dead
if nobody chooses them.
Yes
you can type up
what I wrote
about my yellow dog
but leave off the part
about the other dogs
getting killed dead
because that's too sad.
And don't put
my name
on it
please.
And maybe
it would look good
on yellow paper.
And maybe
the title
should be
YOU COME TOO.
Yes
it looks good
on yellow paper
but you forgot
(again)
to leave more
space
between the lines
like I did
when I wrote it.
That's okay though.
I like that poem
we read today
about street music
in the city.
My street is not
in the middle
of the city
so it doesn't have
that LOUD music
of horns and trucks
clash
flash
screech.
My street is
on the edge
of a city
and it has
quiet music
most of the time
whisp
meow
swish.
My street is a
one
with houses on both sides
and my house is
the white one
with the red door.
There is not too much traffic
on my streetâ
not like in the
middle
of a city.
We play in the yards
and sometimes
in the street
but only if
a grown-up
or the big kids
are out there, too,
and they will shout
Car!
if they see a car
coming down our street.
At both ends
of our street
are yellow signs
that say
Caution! Children at Play!
but sometimes
the cars
pay no attention
and speed down
the road
as if
they are in a BIG hurry
with many miles to go
before they sleep.
That was so great
those poems you showed us
where the words
make the shape
of the thing
that the poem
is aboutâ
like the one about an apple
that was shaped like an apple
and the one about the house
that was shaped like a house.
My brain was pop-pop-popping
when I was looking at those poems.
I never knew a poet person
could do that funny
kind of thing.
I tried one of those
poems that looks like
what it's about.
Yes
you can type up
the yellow dog poem
that looks like a dog
but this time
keep the spaces
exactly
the same
and maybe
it would look
really really good
on yellow paper.
Maybe you could
put my name on it.
But only if you want to.
Only if you think it
looks
good enough.
I was
a little embarrassed
when people said
things to me like
Neat poem, Jack
and
How'd you think of that, Jack?
And I really really like
the one you put up
about the tree
that is shaped like
a tree
not a fake-looking tree
but like a real tree
with straggly branches.
But I want to know
who is the
anonymous poet
in our class
who wrote that
and why didn't
he
or
she
want to put
his or her name
on it?
Was it like me
when I didn't think
my words
were
poems?
Maybe you will tell
the anonymous tree poet
that his or her tree poem
is really
a poem
really really
and a good poem, too.
That was the best best BEST
poem
you read yesterday
by Mr. Walter Dean Myers
the best best BEST
poem
ever.
I am sorry
I took the book home
without asking.
I only got
one spot
on it.
That's why
the page is torn.
I tried to get
the spot
out.
I copied that BEST poem
and hung it on my
bedroom wall
right over my bed
where I can
see it when I'm
lying
down.
Maybe you could
copy it too
and hang it
on the wall
in our class
where we can see it
when we are sitting
at our desks
doing our stuff.
I sure liked that poem
by Mr. Walter Dean Myers
called
“Love That Boy.”
Because of two reasons
I liked it:
One is because
my dad calls me
in the morning
just like that.
He calls
Hey there, son!
And also because
when I had my
yellow dog
I loved that dog
and I would call him
like thisâ
I'd sayâ
Hey there, Sky!
(His name was Sky.)
My yellow dog
followed me everywhere
every which way I turned
he was there
wagging his tail
and slobber
coming out
of his mouth
when he was smiling
at me
all the time
as if he was
saying
thank you thank you thank you
for choosing me
and jumping up on me
his shaggy straggly paws
on my chest
like he was trying
to hug the insides
right out of me.
And when us kids
were playing outside
kicking the ball
he'd chase after it
and push it with his nose
push push push
and getting slobber
all over the ball
but no one cared
because he was such
a funny dog
that dog Sky
that straggly furry
smiling
dog
Sky.
And I'd call him
every morning
every evening
Hey there, Sky!