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Authors: Brad R. Torgersen
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“Silence!” snapped an armed guard.
We twisted and turned our way frantically down a further series of corridors. I couldn’t quite tell, but the floor seemed slanted. We could have been going up or down, I wasn’t really sure.
Then we suddenly emptied out into the blindingly bright sunlight, all of us cringing and raising our hands to shield our eyes.
A quick look around revealed the rubble of what had once been a
s’ndar
industrial district. I actually laughed as I realized we’d been prisoners right under the Expeditionary Force’s nose the whole time. The district had been leveled in the first month of the occupation, and declared off-limits. Barring occasional patrols, no human or
s’ndar
went in or out, except for these resistance fanatics, who’d obviously found a way to operate without being detected.
Until today.
A flight of jets screamed overhead—wide-winged ground attack planes with their payload doors hanging open. A cluster of bombs released and carpeted across the crushed factory complex from which we’d just exited. The blasts were deafening and the ground bucked hard under our feet.
I wondered if we could attempt an escape, and decided there were too many
s’ndar
for us to make it. Our duty hadn’t changed: we had to keep the Senator alive until we could transfer him to friendly hands.
We passed wrecked and burned-out vehicles, and the dried shells of
s’ndar
who’d been left where they’d fallen—their silenced mandibles hanging slackly by threads of dry tissue.
Then we were being herded down into a dry sewer, crouched and shuffling—while the round sewer pipe was somewhat more accommodating to the shorter, squatter
s’ndar
.
After twenty minutes the
s’ndar
ordered a rest, and we stopped. I tried to push up to where Kent was, but was shoved back and ordered not to move.
Petersen was doubled over, gasping.
“Sir,” I said. “Are you hurt?”
“No,” he said. “Just out of shape. It was the cell … the damned cell … nothing to do but go crazy.”
He looked into my eyes, and I realized the Senator might not have been speaking metaphorically. His gaze was awful. Stricken. Not quite
there
somehow. It occurred to me that, for all his slick, football player toughness, Petersen had probably never endured real deprivation before. Certainly not on the scale we’d been suffering since our capture.
I turned to the
s’ndar
. My TAD was gone, but theirs worked. “That air strike was just the first phase,” I told them. “They’re softening up the target before our rifle platoons get sent in to clean up. They know you’re here, and they won’t stop until they find you.”
A single
s’ndar
shape pushed its way back towards me. I recognized her torn raiment; it was the priestess.
“We will move forward rapidly now,” she said.
“Look at us,” I told her, waving my hand at Petersen for emphasis. “We’re in no condition to keep up the pace. In another hundred meters you’d be dragging us. So we’ll have to go slow. I hope that doesn’t scare you too much, but that’s the way it is.”
The priestess appeared to sag in on herself, if only a bit.
“Yes,” she said. “We are scared.”
She studied my face. “You hide it well, but my fear makes you happy.”
“Only because you’re the enemy,” I answered. Then I sighed deeply. “The shame of it is, you didn’t have to be. There was no reason for it.”
“I agree,” she said. “But of course I would:
you
invaded
us
. It is you who are the enemy.”
And suddenly I knew who the
real
enemy was.
“My sister died here,” I said, as the low rumble of more bombs filled the sewer pipe, then fell silent. “She was excited by the idea of your alien culture—and she was killed for her enthusiasm. But she wouldn’t have been here at all—none of us would be here—if not for the Conglomerate playing us off against each other.”
“The ‘deal’ you spoke of,” said the priestess.
“Yes,” I said. “Back on Earth we treat the Conglomerate like saviors. You know something interesting? We’ve never even seen them.”
Her eyes widened. “Never?”
“Just radio transmissions and text messages, and those robotic transport ships that show up in orbit. If they’re so advanced, it should be an easy thing for them to pacify a planet with or without human help. So what’s in it for them, using us like this? And why couldn’t they just leave your world alone? Why do they care if you’re at war?”
“Our particular hive has never known these answers,” she said. “And since the arrival of humans, we’ve never cared to know. We want you gone. That is the sole thing that concerns us.”
“Have you ever stopped to ask why humans would even want to be on your planet in the first place?”
The priestess was silent. As were every other
s’ndar
and human in the sewer. Petersen just looked at me, his limbs slightly shaking as the adrenaline from exertion began to wear off.
“
We’re
here because of them,” I said. “
You’re
fighting an invading force because of them. Maybe it’s time for both sides to take a deep breath and think about that.”
She stared at me. “Go on,” she said at last.
“If you stop fighting,
my
people have no reason to be here.”
“A truce?”
“It would give us time to find out what the Conglomerate
really
wants,” I said.
“And to prevent them from getting it,” added the Senator, who was quick on the uptake, despite his condition.
She turned to the Senator. “Do you have the power to order a cease-fire?”
He nodded his head. “I outrank every General Officer on this planet,” Petersen said, seeming to regain some of his former stature. “I’m sure I can convince our side to enter a temporary cease-fire.”
“What good is temporary?” she asked.
“It gives us breathing space while we each try to talk our superiors into making it permanent.”
“My superiors will assume you are lying to us,” said the priestess.
Suddenly Peterson smiled. “When we stop talking war and start talking negotiations, now we
are
in my bailiwick,” he said. “I propose a trade.”
“A trade?”
“I want you to come back to Earth with me as a good-will ambassador of your race, someone who can confirm what I have to tell them. View it as a public display of friendship and mutual trust.” He turned to me. “And Sergeant Colford here will stay behind in the same capacity and speak to your people.”
“Why me?” I demanded.
“Because you lost a sister in this war, and were incarcerated for some months. If
you
can forgive them and point to the real enemy, I think it will bolster the arguments of whatever
s’ndar
is speaking to his people on our behalf.”
I considered. Could a cease-fire agreement—made in a sewer pipe between a staff sergeant, a priestess, and a Senator who was light years from Washington—actually have any legs?
We’re now in the process of finding out.
I hope my sister didn’t die for nothing. I hope my months of being chained in solitary served some purpose. I hope the priestess can sway her people and the Senator can sway his. I even hope that someday I find out what the Conglomerate wants, and that I stop thinking of
them
as the enemy.
Mostly, though, I hope I can stop being a peacekeeper …
… and start being a peacemaker.
Mike Resnick labored long with me, to bring this story up to professional spec. It was our first ever collaboration, back when I had only two short fiction publications to my credit. Mike’s number one point—through all the toil, much of which I am embarrassed to have put him through—was that any good story demands change from its key characters. Programs like Star Trek can get away with leaving the cast off right where they began, but for literary fiction to have the necessary emotional impact to make it compelling, the main people in the story have to arrive at new places in their heads and in their hearts. If not always physically, in their bodies.
I’ve tried to remember this lesson, when writing successive stories.
“Peacekeeper” obviously relies on my U.S. Army familiarity. Mike had an outstanding invitation from the editors of
The Mammoth Book of SF Wars
to give them a story, and since Mike had handed me my trophy at the Writers of the Future gala event just a few months earlier—me, decked out in my Army ASUs—Mike decided it might be a good idea to kill two birds with one stone: help a newcomer out with some teaching, and a new story sale, while also helping himself out by getting the chops of someone who was actually in the service; and didn’t just know military stuff through popular folklore.
An Iraq war veteran once told me that this story hums with verisimilitude, for the various iterations of Operation Iraqi Freedom. I chalk that up to having spent a lot of time with veterans of OIF and OEF; men and women who’ve been overseas and “seen the beast” as it were. I’m hopeful that this verisimilitude is present for civilian readers as well. I wanted something that would be gritty, but not cliché, nor Hollywood.
As for the moral theme of the story, that’s entirely Mike. Again, his teaching to me—like Mickey yammering in the ear of Rocky Balboa—was that the story wouldn’t be a story unless the main character underwent a significant change of heart. Earlier iterations had Sergeant Colford walking out of the mess more or less the same man as when he went into the mess. The story was thus a “picture frame” look at war (and prisoner-of-war life) on an alien world.
And yes, I wrote “Peacekeeper” before I wrote “The Chaplain’s Assistant.” There are similarities between the two—especially when you consider the changes Mike wanted me to make to the former. I consider it the privilege of the writer to revisit an idea or a concept more than once, without having to so thoroughly redress the movie set that things become exhaustively different.
Ultimately, Mike got a story he felt was competent by his standards, and I got a huge helping hand, in the form of a tough, old, experienced pro, reaching down to assist a fledgling guy who was still brand new to the publishing business. Mike showed a lot of patience with me, on this work. And I am grateful for that. It’s to Mike’s credit that he never lost his temper nor his sense of humor. Every time I goofed up, he simply pushed back and said, “I won’t give you the answer straight out, kid, but here’s a few clues to maybe take you in the right direction …”
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Teacher: Dave Wolverton
Dave—many readers know him by the pen name
David Farland—
was recently interviewed by KSL television in Salt Lake City, who pronounced him the Godfather of Utah’s literay Science Fiction and fantasy community. That title is well-deserved. There are arguably thousands of us who have passed through Dave’s hands, if you include all his many workshop appearances, panel lectures at events like
Life, The Universe, and Everything,
and his ongoing role as the Coordinating Judge for the L. Ron Hubbard Presents Writers and Illustrators of the Future Contest.
Find me a bestseller in the SF/F field—Brandon Sanderson? James Dashner?—and if that person has roots in Utah, (s)he has probably sat at Dave Wolverton’s feet.
I was therefore very eager and anxious to make a good impression on Dave, when I approached him at the CONduit SF/F convention in Salt Lake City, in May 2009. One of my stories which I’d entered into Writers of the Future, was a Finalist for Quarter One of the 26
th
annual iteration of said Contest. I felt—at the time—that this story (“Outbound”, which eventually saw print in the November 2010 issue of
Analog
magazine) was the best story I’d ever written. Over the holiday period of 2008 I’d poured every lick of what I’d learned and what I knew about storytelling, into that one singular piece. I knew in my heart it was me firing on all cylinders. And I hoped very much that maybe Dave could clue me in as to how much longer it would take the Quarter One judges to reach a decision.
“I think I have your story,” Dave told me, his eyes unfocused as he thought about the Finalist manuscripts he’d been sent by Joni Labaqui, the Contest Administrator.
I could have just died. Dave Wolverton.
The
Dave Wolverton. The Godfather of Utah’s SF/F literary scene. He had my story! It was being judged
by Dave
for the Contest!
Which meant a hell of a lot to me (later) when Joni had to let me know that my story did
not
win. Because in the depths of utter and total despair—no rejection has ever so thoroughly crushed me—I had Dave’s critique (which he was then allowed to release to me) to buoy my spirits. Dave said (in his letter) that he didn’t know why the other judges hadn’t liked the story.
He’d
certainly liked it. And while he did have some suggestions for potential changes that might be made, he felt like it was a strong piece even if I changed nothing.
When I sent the story to editor Stan Schmidt at Analog (in the wake of my eventual Contest win, with “Exanastasis”, for Quarter Three) I opened my cover letter stating, “Dear Stan, Dave Wolverton said he liked this story a lot, and I hope you do too.”
So, it’s fair to say that Dave Wolverton fairly delivered me into my professional writing career. And he’s continued to be an enthusiastic teacher and booster ever since. To include helping me with my novel projects—novel writing being, for me, an entirely different animal, compared to short fiction writing.
Dave’s got an uncanny, almost unconscious grasp of what I call “classically epic” storytelling. The kind of storytelling that makes Tolkien’s
Lord of the Rings
resonate with generation after generation of fans. The kind of storytelling that helped make the
Twilight
books and movies into such mega-sellers. Storytelling that continues to show up in the works of authors from across the country and around the world—can Dave now claim to be the
international
Godfather of SF/F?—who are busting the tape with their bestsellers.
I occasionally think it’s not fair that us local Utah boys get to have the kind of access that we have, to Dave. As teachers go, this is a mighty man. Someone people pay hundreds or even thousands of dollars to come from all over the globe to see, and learn from. And there he is at LTUE every year, saying hello to all his friends, and all of his students (both former and current) and spreading his ethereal pixie dust of success on our heads; like a bearded Willy Wonka promising golden tickets, if only we will just keep trying, and maybe take a little bit of his advice.
I’ve spoken before, about some of Utah’s SF/F elder statesmen. Dave is definitely among their ranks. A pillar of the scene. And it’s been both my delight and my privilege to get to know not just Dave, but also his wonderful wife Mary, and to include Dave in my somewhat select circle of industry counselors: men and women from whom I will absolutely entertain any suggestion, cherish any nugget of wisdom, and ponder every bit of insight. This man helps build blockbuster careers, he does. Even in the face of tremendous professional and personal difficulty.
When Dave is gone, I suspect all of us—whom he has helped—are going to pool our resources and erect some kind of memorial in his honor. Like the fictional Argonath on the river Anduin. How else to honor a man who has so thoroughly enriched and fostered the Utah speculative community? One pictures giant stone statues of Dave, Tracy Hickman, L.E. Modesitt, Jr., and several other Utah SF/F writers, their stone hands collectively beckoning us through the doors at LTUE every February:
come, learn, enjoy, and succeed!
My hat is off to you, Dave. Thank you for putting so much effort into so many of our lives, for so long, and with so much creative spark. You light so many candles in this genre. I hope all of us shining brightly together, serve as a testament to your hope and faith in us.
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