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Authors: Joe Dever

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(
136
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(
138
) Replaced ‘tranquility’ with ‘tranquillity’. Replaced ‘returning and’ with ‘returning, and’.

(
140
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
141
) Replaced ‘stubbly legs’ with ‘stubby legs’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
145
) Replaced ‘magicians' guild’ with ‘Magicians' Guild’.

(
146
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘you — but’ with ‘you, but’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.

(
148
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
149
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
150
) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘tome’ with ‘Tome’. Replaced ‘Ahead you’ with ‘Ahead, you’. Replaced ‘bridge (erase’ with ‘bridge. (Erase’. Replaced ‘
Action Chart
).’ with ‘
Action Chart
.)’. Replaced ‘Dazganon, and’ with ‘Dazganon and’. Replaced ‘Tzor — The’ with ‘Tzor, The’.

(
152
) Replaced ‘sound; it’ with ‘sound: it’. Replaced ‘source of the cacophony — the chamber’ with ‘source of the cacophony: the chamber’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘
Rhunotar
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunotar’ ’. Replaced ‘
Rhunadan
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced ‘
Rhunaguin
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunaguin’ ’. Replaced ‘form, and the sudden cessation of mind contact, throws’ with ‘form — and the sudden cessation of mind contact — throws’. Replaced ‘Darkness — you’ with ‘Darkness: you’.

(
155
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘scarab’ with ‘Scarab’.

(
156
) Replaced ‘all — they’ with ‘all: they’.

(
157
) Replaced ‘firestorm’ with ‘fire-storm’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.

(
160
) Replaced ‘magicians' guild’ with ‘Magicians' Guild’. Replaced ‘despatches’ with ‘dispatches’. Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’. Replaced ‘when precisely’ with ‘precisely when’. Replaced ‘Kai — so’ with ‘Kai, so’. Replaced ‘Tyso — the’ with ‘Tyso, the’. Replaced ‘Banedon — the’ with ‘Banedon, the’. Replaced ‘advisors — Lord’ with ‘advisors, Lord’.

(
161
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
163
) Replaced ‘Kai exorcism’ with ‘Kai Exorcism’. Replaced ‘returning and’ with ‘returning, and’.

(
164
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘dagger’ with ‘Dagger’ as it is a Weapon in your possession. Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal’.

(
167
) Replaced ‘Kai Blast attack’ with ‘Kai-blast’. Replaced ‘all — they’ with ‘all: they’.

(
168
) Replaced ‘shock-wave’ with ‘shock wave’.

(
169
) Replaced ‘counterspell’ with ‘
Counterspell
’. Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal — and’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal, and’.

(
170
) Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’.

(
171
) Replaced ‘jet black’ with ‘jet-black’. Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(
174
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
175
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
176
) Replaced ‘Reavers — wholly’ with ‘Reavers, wholly’.

(
179
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’ in the text and in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’.

(
180
) Deleted ‘ which you keep in your backpack’. Replaced ‘pictures or’ with ‘pictures, or’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell — Invisible Fist — and’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell
Invisible Fist
and’.

(
183
) Replaced ‘Shamath — the’ with ‘Shamath, the’.

(
184
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Invisible Shield — as’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell
Invisible Shield
as’. Replaced ‘Grand Discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(
185
) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’.

(
187
) Replaced ‘mind-force’ with ‘Mindforce’.

(
188
) Removed quote marks from thought-speech in both the main text and in the illustration's caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
189
) Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slain’. Replaced ‘blinded and’ with ‘blinded, and’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘these weapons’ with ‘these Weapons’.

(
191
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘interior and’ with ‘interior, and’.

(
192
) Replaced ‘shock-wave’ with ‘shock wave’.

(
193
) Added ‘ (in addition to all other combat bonuses for this Special Item)’ after the
COMBAT SKILL
bonus in harmony with
Section 64
.

(
194
) Replaced ‘Cauldron — a’ with ‘Cauldron, a’.

(
196
) Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’.

(
198
) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.

(
199
) Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal — and’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal, and’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘mindforce’ with ‘Mindforce’. Replaced ‘Bow, or’ with ‘Bow or’. Replaced ‘psychic disciplines’ with ‘psychic abilities’. Replaced ‘brutal and’ with ‘brutal, and’ in the text and in the illustration's caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘automaton — cold’ with ‘automaton: cold’.

(
201
) Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’.

(
202
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian’. Replaced ‘morass yet’ with ‘morass, yet’. Replaced ‘water — it’ with ‘water: it’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.

(
203
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
205
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘The spirit of’ with ‘The spirits of’. Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘Vashna, Nadziranim’ with ‘Vashna, and Nadziranim’. Replaced ‘Gnaag — the Archlord of Helgedad — who’ with ‘Gnaag, the Archlord of Helgedad, who’.

(
208
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Counterspell — upon’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell
Counterspell
upon’.

(
209
) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘your life and your quest comes’ with ‘your life and your quest come’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’. Replaced ‘Dragon — the’ with ‘Dragon, the’.

(
211
) Replaced ‘Kai!’ and’ with ‘Kai!’ — and’. Added ‘ (in addition to all other combat bonuses for this Special Item)’ after the
COMBAT SKILL
bonus in harmony with
Section 64
. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘champion — Kekataag — the’ with ‘champion Kekataag the’.

(
212
) Replaced ‘attack; double’ with ‘attack: double’.

(
213
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
215
) Replaced ‘firestorm’ with ‘fire-storm’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘Lord’ with ‘Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.

(
216
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘Lord, and’ with ‘Lord or higher, and’. Added the option ‘If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, turn to 271.’ to bring
Section 271
back into the game. Replaced ‘Disciplines, do’ with ‘Disciplines, nor a Bow, do’. Replaced ‘soft sludgy’ with ‘soft, sludgy’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.

(
217
) Replaced ‘ceiling, then’ with ‘ceiling. Then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.

(
218
) Replaced ‘pin-points’ with ‘pinpoints’. Replaced ‘closer so they’ with ‘closer, they’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Yanis — the Shining City — in’ with ‘Yanis, the Shining City, in’.

(
219
) Replaced ‘mind-force’ with ‘Mindforce’.

(
220
) Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘sixth senses warn’ with ‘Sixth Sense warns’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’. Replaced ‘Dragon — the’ with ‘Dragon, the’.

(
222
) Replaced ‘pin-point’ with ‘pinpoint’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.

(
223
) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘newly acquired’ with ‘newly-acquired’. Replaced ‘accounts of your experiences on the planes’ with ‘accounts of the planes’. Replaced ‘Gates coupled to’ with ‘Gates, coupled with’.

(
224
) Replaced ‘Sommerswerd, or’ with ‘Sommerswerd or’.

(
225
) Replaced ‘take Avarvae’ with ‘takes Avarvae’. Replaced ‘late; you’ with ‘late: you’. Replaced ‘Damned — the’ with ‘Damned, the’.

(
227
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
228
) Replaced ‘torsoes’ with ‘torsos’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Künae — the’ with ‘Künae, the’.

(
229
) Replaced ‘(1,3,5,7,9)’ with ‘(i.e. 1, 3, 5, 7, or 9)’. Replaced ‘(0,2,4,6,8)’ with ‘(i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, or 0)’. Replaced ‘legion — they’ with ‘legion; they’.

(
231
) Replaced ‘are a long line’ with ‘is a long line’.

(
232
) Replaced ‘throne of power’ with ‘Throne of Power’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘
Rhunadan
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘tome’ with ‘Tome’. Replaced ‘Ghandezh — the’ with ‘Ghandezh, the’. Replaced ‘Künae — the Lords of Decay — and’ with ‘Künae, the Lords of Decay, and’.

(
235
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
236
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘motionless, then’ with ‘motionless; then’. Replaced ‘interior and’ with ‘interior, and’.

(
237
) Replaced ‘champion — Kekataag’ with ‘champion, Kekataag’.

(
241
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(
243
) Replaced ‘Shamath, ‘it’ with ‘Shamath. ‘It’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Avarvae — I trust’ with ‘Avarvae! I trust’.

(
244
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Quiver,, but’ with ‘Quiver), but’. Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal’.

(
245
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Teleport — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell
Teleport
and’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
246
) Replaced ‘spell — Teleport — and’ with ‘spell
Teleport
and’. Replaced ‘out-distance’ with ‘outdistance’.

(
247
) Replaced ‘Kai blast’ with ‘Kai-blast’. Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’.

(
248
) Replaced ‘Khor, in’ with ‘Khor in’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’.

(
249
) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Cadak, and decide’ with ‘Cadak and decide’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘attack and, moments’ with ‘attack, and moments’.

(
250
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘orange and’ with ‘orange, and’. Replaced ‘armour and’ with ‘armour, and’. Replaced ‘an apex’ with ‘the apex’. Replaced ‘Dragonlord — the ruler of this realm of fire — and’ with ‘Dragonlord, the ruler of this realm of fire, and’.

(
251
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Levitation — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell
Levitation
and’. Replaced ‘rockface, then’ with ‘rock-face. Then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.

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