Read Yom Kippur as Manifest in an Approaching Dorsal Fin Online
Authors: Adam Byrn Tritt
us?”
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He stares at me.
“The answer is yes to both,” I tell him.
“You’re just getting to see it today. Welcome
to Florida. If you plan on hiking instead,
remember, we’re the only state with all four
kinds of venomous snakes.”
He walks off.
I continue my walk. With each step I think
of a person I have wronged. I apologize. With
the next step, I forgive myself as well. I do this until I can think of no more people, but I am
human and I must have hurt more people
than I think simply by the act of living. I apologize, with each step, contemplating the
many ways we hurt each other and never
know it, cannot help it. And, when this is
done, forgive myself.
As I continue to walk, I think of each per-
son I know has hurt me. I forgive them. It no
longer matters. In the span of time, what
could it matter? If they have not admitted
guilt, what does it matter? I forgive them. I
forgive them all. If I have thought badly of
them for the wrong they have done, for this,
even, I apologize and forgive myself.
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Yom Kippur as Manifest . . .
Why carry guilt? Why carry anger? Why
carry a careless word? Of what use is it in the
span of years? A million years, and how long
am I here? There is a shark in the water.
Ga-te, ga-te, Pāra-ga-te, Pāra-sam-ga-te,
Bodhi svā-hā.
Gone, gone. Beyond gone. Past beyond gone. There is enlightenment.
I start to run. Barefoot I pad the sand
beneath me. Step by step following the mean
line of the surf. If the waves come in further,
I lift my legs higher, pull up my knees, splash
as each sole descends. This varies my running,
changes the muscles used, increases my
activity.
With each footfall, I think of a year of my
life. A year. Each time I pad the sand beneath
me; grains millions of years in creation, mil-
lions in erosion. Each step, a year. I run out
of years quickly, in a matter of half a minute.
I think of my potential lifespan and run them
out in another half minute.
I think then of the people I love and run
them out, each step a year of life. My family,
less than a minute each, like the blink in time
they are, we are. My friends, a minute. I think
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of those I know, enjoy the company of, gone
in minutes, and I do this consecutively but I
know it is all concurrent, all gone, more or
less, in the steps it takes me to run out mine.
I think of those I don’t like. All gone too. No
different. All the same. We are a set of foot-
prints. We wash away.
I wish all people happiness and the root of
happiness. I wish all people freedom from suf-
fering and the root of suffering. Even those I
don’t like. Especially. Now, before I become
invisible among the sands. Now, before I wash
away.
I have run out of people. I have not run out
of beach. I continue, watching the sandpipers
skitter the foamline as I splash and make
impressions which are instantly gone behind
me as the tide washes out. I run and am not
tired. How much further?
I expected to run for a few minutes. I
thought, how long can I run before I need to
turn back? How far can I go before I know I
am half-spent and turn around to run back
or all spent and must walk my way back? But
neither point comes. I run.
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Yom Kippur as Manifest . . .
I run easily, no pain, barely sweating, my
heart slow, my breathing calm. It was not long
ago I would run five minutes and be exhausted.
I would run and walk and run and walk in
alternate minutes. Now I am easy and feel
free and comfortable, open. How long have I
been running?
I choose a point in the distance, a home
among the many but different in color than
most, and decide to run to that, then turn
around. On the return I can sense no reason
to be heading back but my desire to return to
my writing. Still, I am not tired, not worn,
my breathing slow and full.
I see the salmon-hued building that signals
where I started. There is the boardwalk, invis-
ible behind the sea oats and dunes. I run up
to the ramp and there I stop.
Once to my car, I look at the meter. I have
been gone more than an hour and a quarter
and it flashes at me. I have run for much of
that time. I have run for nearly an hour. It is
not a marathon, but it is an amazement, an
accomplishment, and I have a sudden keen
sense I have not eaten anything today but half
a cup of milk. I am not fasting. I cannot fast.
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It is bad for my health and is, therefore, for-
bidden by Talmudic law. Certain people and
people under certain conditions, according
to the Talmud, may not fast. I have brought
nothing by way of food with me and across
the empty street is a Coldstone.
I get my things from the car, brush off my
feet, put my sandals on, put another quarter
into the meter and walk over. What could
make this day more perfect than adding an
ice cream?
There is a Starbucks, on one side of it and,
on the other, a Bizarro’s Pizza. There used to
be café here Lee and I ate at once; had lunch
with Jeannie, Joseph, and Connor on our first
visit to Melbourne. It left with Frances, or
Wilma, or one of the September storms to
visit in 2004. The building is still empty,
partial.
I walk into Coldstone. It is slightly after
twelve and it feels as though there have been
few customers today. I ask the young lady
behind the counter for plain ice cream with
no fat and no sugar. They have ice cream with
no flavoring; simply the taste of milk, crys-
talized, thick and solid. No sweetener. Why
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would milk need sugar? She is happy to oblige
and what size? One cup. A small.
Would you like anything in that? No. Wait,
yes.
Please, if you would, some almonds.
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Burial
So we buried her,
My brother and I.
After words that did not mean
anything
and time spent staring at the torah,
We buried her.
After a procession to the graveside
down the newly swept path
at the end of which waited
a mound of dirt,
higher than myself.
I thought I should climb up and slide
down on the seat of my pants
as I would have when she first came to
live with us.
I would get dirty, full of thick clay
that she would do her best to wash off
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and end up trying to scrub the freckles
off my knees.
Instead, I buried her.
Standing around the grave
my parents and uncles, aunts, a cousin
or two,
a rabbi I had never met,
my brother with a shovel
and one for me.
I should have climbed the hill
sat on the top
(instead us all being below)
and kicked the dirt in with my heels
buried her with my body
taken home dirt in my clothes
and pores to scrub off later
but, instead, I took the shovel from my
brother
and buried her.
Stabbing at the mound
reducing it bit by bit, biting it away
one day at a time.
The first shovelful fell
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making barely a hollow whisper as it
hit the box.
It was a cheap casket of thin pine and
not much inside to absorb the
impact
but an old body
that hadn’t been whole for years
with pieces missing inside and out.
There wasn’t much left but
I buried her.
The first shovelful hit
and dispersed over the box.
Surrounded by the family I had not
seen for years,
people I did not know who had
gathered from all over,
coming together to watch as
I buried her.
Shovel passing shovel
mine and my brother’s
in a crisscrossing pattern
biting at the same mound
reducing it bit by bit
each burying our version of her
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and the rabbi I didn’t know said,
“Let me spell you,”
and I said “No,”
as I dug in with my
shovel,
“I’ll do this.”
Shovel
as my tears dropped into the dirt in my
shovel
and my sweat drenched the handle of my
shovel
and the dirt in the grave under my
shovel
and the box under my
shovel
as I buried her.
My father stood by
my mother stood by
uncles and aunts and cousins I didn’t
know stood by.
My brother sat down
as the rabbi no one knew took his place
and his shovel
to rain soil on my grandmother
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until I asked him to stop.
I finished the job myself.
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We talked later, my brother and I,
about burying my grandmother,
how the sound of falling dirt was a
rhythmic rain,
why no one else seemed to care.
And he apologized for not finishing
the job,
for putting his shovel down to a
stranger
We talked about her burial. “Our first,”
he said, “but not our last.”
Just the first in a long line:
mothers and fathers
uncles, aunts, and cousins—
wives—
and on
until someday
one of us is left to bury the other
and he promised
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if it was me
he would not stop.
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Funeral,
Expurgated
My wife tells me she cannot believe
what writers have to do. They
must bare their souls, score their
psyches raw and place what is inside, outside,
on paper, in an artistic manner. And we must
make it sound as though it was effortless and
fun.
True enough. That’s the fun part. I think
every writer is an exhibitionist to some degree
and, perhaps, a bit of a masochist. Or martyr.
Or minister. The act of writing, for me, must
be sacred.
It also takes bravery to be a writer. This
observation comes not from me but, again,
from my esteemed helpmate, my goddess
incarnate, she who is the Joy of the Universe
and Queen of Creation: my wife.
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She states she cannot imagine the difficulty
of having scraped the emotion from the soul
and then putting it out in public where the
people will not only read of our own exterior
and interior lives but those of others as well
and then judge how artfully or entertainingly
we have rendered them. How do we not hurt
feelings, bruise hearts, hide that cause which
is private while making public the effects?
How do writers not end up either ineffective,
with a social network intact, or effective and
read but friendless and lonely? How do we
not alienate our families and friends?
Who says we don’t?
I have struggled with this. How much to
say? What to leave out? How does an essay-
ist balance narrative with personal relation-
ships? I have no idea but know I will struggle
with this again and again in essay after essay.
I expose what I need but leave out what does
not move the concept forward, support the
idea, make more clear the conceit and reality
I wish the reader to experience.
But my idea of what needs to be exposed
and what does not may be fully different than
that of the person suffering the exposure. As
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a family member or friend is feeling left naked
in the wind while I am thinking I did noth-
ing more than describe his hat.
I am going to be brave now. It’s all I know
to do. I’m sorry.
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When I die I want to be dropped off a cliff.
Or left in a forest. That would be fine as
well. Throw a party. Say what you will. Cry,
laugh. Recall anything I might have done of
worth. Remember anything I might have
done or said that made you smile. Please for-
get any act or utterance of mine which might
have caused hurt or pain as you’ll know it was
not done of meanness or cruelty, but of the
ignorance we all share as the fallible humans
we are.
Make no marker. If my deeds are of worth,
people will remember them. And the hunt
to find my grave or remains may prove quite
a cottage industry. On the other hand, if I
have left nothing of worth no one will look
for me. If I am not memorable, no marker
will make me so.
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It is Thursday night. The phone rings twice.
Lee, my wife, answers it. It is late, nearly ten-thirty at night, and seldom does the house