Authors: Ken Follett
Tags: #Fiction, #Thrillers, #Espionage, #General
A SIGNET BOOK
THIS BOOK WAS WRITTEN in 1976, immediately before Eye of the Needle,
and I think it is the best of my unsuccessful books. It was published
under the pseudonym Zachary Stone, as was The Modigliani Scandal,
because the books are similar: they lack a central character, but
feature several groups of characters whose stories are linked and share
a common climax.
In Paper Money the links are less fortuitous, for the book is supposed
to show how crime, high finance, and journalism are corruptly
interconnected. The ending is rather somber by comparison with The
Modigliani Scandal--in fact it is almost a tragedy. However, it is the
differences and similarities between Paper Money and Eye of the Needle
that are most instructive. (Readers who want the cake, not the recipe,
should skip this and go straight to Chapter One.) The plot of Paper
Money is the cleverest I have ever devised, and the small sales of the
book convinced me that clever plots satisfy authors more than readers.
The plot of Eye of the Needle is of course very simple--in fact it can
be written down in three paragraphs, as indeed I did write it when I
first thought of it. Eye of the Needle has only three or four main
characters whereas Paper Money has a dozen or so. Yet with its complex
plot and large cast, Paper Money is only half the length of Eye of the
Needle. As a writer I have always had to struggle against a tendency
to underwrite, and in Paper Money you see me struggling in vain.
Consequently the many characters are painted in brisk, bold brush
strokes and the book lacks the feeling of detailed personal involvement
with the private lives of the characters that readers demand of a best
One of the strengths of the book is its form. The action takes place
during a single day in the life of a London evening newspaper (I worked
for such a newspaper in 1973 and 1974) and each chapter Chronicles one
hour of that day in three or four scenes describing both what happens
at the news desk and what happens in the stories the paper is covering
(or missing). Eye of the Needle has an even more rigid structure,
although nobody to my knowledge has ever noticed it: there are six
parts, each with six chapters (except for the last part, which has
seven), the first chapter in each part dealing with the spy, the second
with the spy catchers, and so on until the sixth, which always tells of
the international military consequences of what has gone before.
Readers do not notice such things--and why should they?--but still I
suspect that regularity, and even symmetry, contribute to what they
perceive as a well-told story. The only feature Paper Money shares
with Eye of the Needle is a wealth of good minor characters tarts,
thieves, half-witted children, working-class wives, and lonely old men.
In subsequent books I have not done this, for it only diverts from the
main characters and their story; yet I often wonder whether I am being
too clever. Today I am not as sure as I was in 1976 of the links
between crime, high finance, and journalism; but I think this book is
true to life in another way. It presents a detailed picture of the
London that I knew in the seventies, with its policemen and crooks,
bankers and call girls, reporters and politicians, its shops and slums,
its roads and its river. I loved it, and I hope you will too.
IT WAS the luckiest night of Tim Fitzpeterson's life.
He thought this the moment he opened his eyes and saw the girl, in bed
beside him, still sleeping. He did not move, for fear of waking her;
but he looked at her, almost furtively, in the cold light of the London
dawn. She slept flat on her back, with the absolute relaxation of
small children. Tim was reminded of his own Adrienne when she was
little. He put the unwelcome thought out of his mind.
The girl beside him had red hair, fitting her small head like a cap,
showing her tiny ears. All her features were small: nose, chin,
cheekbones, dainty teeth. Once, in the night, he had covered her face
with his broad, clumsy hands, pressing his fingers gently into the
hollows of her eyes and her cheeks, opening her soft lips with his
thumbs, as if his skin could feel her beauty like the heat from a fire.
Her left arm lay limply outside the coverlet, which was pushed down to
reveal narrow, delicate shoulders and one shallow breast, its nipple
soft in slumber.
They lay apart, not quite touching, although he could feel the warmth of
her thigh close to his. He looked away from her, up at the ceiling, and
for a moment he let the sheer joy of remembered fornication wash over
him like a physical thrill; then he got up.
He stood beside the bed and looked back at her.
She was undisturbed. The candid morning light made her no less lovely,
despite tousled hair and the untidy remains of what had been elaborate
makeup. Daybreak was less kind to Tim Fitzpeterson, he knew. That was
why he tried not to wake her: he wanted to look in a mirror before she
He went naked, padding across the dull green living-room carpet to the
bathroom. In the space of a few moments he saw the place as if for the
first time, and found it hopelessly unexciting. The carpet was matched
by an even duller green sofa, with fading flowered cushions. There was a
plain wooden desk, of the kind to be found in a million offices; an
elderly black-and-white television set; a filing cabinet; and a
bookshelf of legal and economic textbooks plus several volumes of
He had once thought it so dashing to have a London pied-a'-terre.
The bathroom had a full-length mirror--bought not by Tim, but by his
wife, in the days before she had totally retired from town life. He
looked in it while he waited for the bath to fill, wondering what there
was about this middle-aged body that could drive a beautiful girl
of--what, twenty-five?--into a frenzy of lust. He was healthy, but not
fit; not in the sense with which that word is used to describe men who
do exercises and visit gymnasia. He was short, and his naturally broad
frame was thickened by a little superfluous fat, particularly on the
chest, waist, and buttocks. His physique was okay, for a man of
forty-one, but it was nothing to excite even the most physical of women.
The mirror became obscured by steam, and Tim got into the bath. He
rested his head and closed his eyes. It occurred to him that he had had
less than two hours of sleep, yet he felt quite fresh. His upbringing
would have him believe that pain and discomfort, if not actual illness,
were the consequences of late nights, dancing, adultery, and strong
drink. All those sins together ought to bring down the wrath of God. No:
the wages of sin were sheer delight. He began to soap himself languidly.
It had started at one of those appalling dinners: grapefruit cocktail,
overdone steak and beg no surprise for three hundred members of a
useless organization. Tim's speech had been just another exposition of
the Government's current strategy, emotionally weighted to appeal to the
particular sympathies of the audience. Afterwards he had agreed to go
somewhere else for a drink with one of his colleagues^ brilliant young
economist--and two faintly interesting people from the audience. The
venue turned out to be a nightclub which would normally have been beyond
Tim's means; but someone else had paid the entrance. Once inside, he
began to enjoy himself, so much so that he bought a bottle of champagne
with his credit card. More people had joined their group: a film company
executive Tim had vaguely heard of; a playwright he hadn't; a left-wing
economist who shook hands with a wry smile and avoided shop talk; and
the girls. The champagne and the floor show inflamed him slightly. In
the old days, he would at this point have taken Julia home and made love
to her roughly--she liked that, just occasionally. But now she no longer
came to town, and he no longer went to nightclubs; not normally.
The girls had not been introduced. Tim started to talk to the nearest, a
flat-chested redhead in a long dress of some pale color. She looked like
a model, and said she was an actress. He expected that he would find her
boring, and that she would reciprocate. That was when he got the first
intimation that tonight would be special: she seemed to find him
fascinating. Their close conversation gradually isolated them from the
rest of the party, until someone suggested another club. Tim immediately
said he would go home. The redhead caught his arm and asked him not to;
and Tim, who was being gallant to a beautiful woman for the first time
in twenty years, instantly agreed to go along. He wondered, as he got
out of the bath, what they had talked about for so long. The work of a
Junior Minister in the Department of Energy was hardly cocktail-party
conversation: when it was not technical, it was highly confidential.
Perhaps they had discussed politics. Had he told wry anecdotes about
senior politicians, in the deadpan tone which was his only way of being
He could not remember. All he could recall was the way she had sat, with
every part of her body angled devotedly toward him: head, shoulders,
knees, feet; a physical attitude that was at once intimate and teasing.
He wiped steam off the shaving mirror and rubbed his chin speculatively,
sizing up the task.
He had very dark hair, and his beard, if he were to grow it, would be
thick. The rest of his face was, to say the least, ordinary. The chin
was receding, the nose sharply pointed with twin white marks either side
of the bridge where spectacles had rested for thirty-five years, the
mouth not small but a little grim, the ears too large, the forehead
intellectually high. No character could be read there. It was a face
trained to conceal thoughts, instead of displaying emotion.
He switched on the shaver and grimaced to bring all of his left cheek
into view. He was not even ugly. Some girls had a thing about ugly men,
he had heard--he was in no position to verify such generalizations about
women. Tim Fitzpeterson did not even fit into that dubiously fortunate
But perhaps it was time to think again about the categories he fitted
into. The second club they had visited had been the kind of place he
would never knowingly have entered. He was no music-lover, and if he had
liked it his taste would not have included the blaring, insistent row
which drowned conversation in The Black Hole. Nevertheless, he had
danced to the jerky, exhibitionist dancing that seemed to be de rigueur
there. He enjoyed it, and thought he acquitted himself well enough;
there were no amused glances from the other patrons, as he feared there
might be. Perhaps that was because many of them were his age.
The disc jockey, a bearded young man in a T-shirt improbably printed
with the words
"Harvard Business School," capriciously played a slow ballad, sung by an
American with a heavy cold. They were on the small dance floor at the
The girl came close to him and wound her arms around him. Then he knew
she meant it; and he had to decide whether he was equally serious.
With her hot, lithe body clinging to him as closely as a wet towel, he
made up his mind very quickly.
He bent his head--he was slightly shorter than her--and murmured into
her ear: "Come and have a drink at my flat."
He kissed her in the taxi--there was something he had not done for many
years! The kiss was so luscious, like a kiss in a dream, that he touched
her breasts, wonderfully small and hard under the loose gown; and after
that they found it difficult to restrain themselves until they reached
The token drink was forgotten. We must have got into bed in less than a
minute, Tim thought smugly. He finished shaving and looked around for
cologne. There was an old bottle in the wall cabinet.
He went back to the bedroom. She was still asleep. He found his dressing
gown and cigarettes and sat in the upright chair by the window.
I was pretty terrific in bed, he thought. He knew he was kidding
himself: she had been the activist, the creative one. On her initiative
they had done things which Tim could not suggest to Julia after fifteen
years in the same bed.
Yes, Julia. He gazed unseeing from the first-floor window, across the
narrow street to the red-brick Victorian school, its meager playground
painted with the fading yellow lines of a net ball court. He still felt