Authors: Michael Pye
Michael Pye is a novelist, historian, journalist and broadcaster. He has written nine other books, including The Drowning Room and Maximum City: The Biography of New York; He lives in Portugal.
From the back cover:
You could meet him today: the man who wants your life. He\a146ll take it, literally: kill you and live your life better than you ever could.
He\a146s learned with chilling ease how to find the rich, comfortable lives that nobody will miss \a150 at least, not for a while.
In Michaels Pye\a146s brilliant thriller such a man kills \a150 and then retreats to the peace of the Portuguese forest, menacing the hearts and lives of people who cannot know what he truly is: the local lawyer, a woman relishing her first chance to bring an erotic kind of drama into her provincial world, and the museum official sent to track him down, who has his own reasons for wanting to make a new life.
Their exhilarating, terrifying game of death, sex and fantasy seems to end on an apocalyptic night of fire. But for the survivors, the horror has only just begun……..
TAKING LIVES
by
MICHAEL PYE
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Two boys ride the bus through Florida. One of them won’t be alive much longer.
This is summer, 1987. Hot skies going basalt, boiled air. A road straight and bone-coloured through grass and marsh.
Neither of the boys belongs here, you can tell. They stare out of the windows, but they don’t want to be caught doing it.
The highway leads only on. They see towns that repeat each other like puzzle pictures: spot the eight differences in oceans of crabgrass and civic pink oleanders.
The first boy is Martin Arkenhout. Seventeen. Doesn’t talk to people much; he doesn’t have the habit. Besides, he’s foreign - Dutch, blond, tall, white, lanky - and he can’t stop himself feeling scared and superior all at once. He sees the crackers on the bus, and he thinks they’re potato eaters out of some beach party Van Gogh. There are Hispanics, too, with the dark skin that looks rich to him, but he won’t reach out. He’s a careful boy.
He works out kilometres and miles to judge the speed. He slouches back to the bathroom and pisses into the lurching tank of liquid, then weaves back to his seat. He gets to wondering, eyes glazed, whether he truly wants to
be here: a kid, going to be just a foreign kid at some American high school for a year, expected somehow to grow up.
Each stop, he gets off the bus and buys more Pepsi. By eleven in the morning, he has a fair caffeine buzz, his eyes very open on the world but with not much to see.
‘I don’t know why I did this,’ someone says.
Arkenhout looks up.
‘I thought this was a really cool idea,’ the second boy says. ‘See America.’
‘Where are you going?’
‘College. The hard way.’
‘Oh,’ Arkenhout says. ‘So am I.’
‘You’re not American?’
‘I’m Dutch.’
‘Cool.’ The word sounds like absolution for being foreign. After a while, the boy says: ‘You have those marijuana cafes, don’t you?’
Arkenhout says, ‘And Rembrandt.’
‘Yeah, yeah. Sorry.’
This second boy is tall, blond and white, like a snapshot of Arkenhout that’s been retouched: hair seriously cut, more worked out, less tired and more brown.
‘Seth Goodman,’ the second boy says.
Arkenhout thinks the name sounds like a fiction; he remembers nineteenth-century novels in English class.
‘Christ!’ Goodman says. ‘The bus -‘
The doors are already shut. A parting signal of blue-black exhaust. The boys run and hammer on the doors and after a false start and a moment, the driver opens up.
‘You didn’t hear me shouting?’ he says. They both apologize, remembering the same lessons: nice boys.
They sit apart for the next hour and a half. At the next stop they buy chili dogs and coffee.
‘I’m going to New York University,’ Goodman says.
‘I’m in America for a year abroad. Before university.’ But Goodman doesn’t seem to mind the canyon gap in status. They’re both on the road, after all.
‘Where are you from?’ Arkenhout asks, politely.
‘Jackson, Michigan. In the Midwest. Famous for its giant waterfall with coloured lights.’
‘This is my first time in America.’
‘Really. You play baseball in Holland?’
In the next few hours, Goodman starts explaining. He starts in slogans: how he takes the bus for environmental reasons, how he wants to see America. He pulls up a bit of personal information: he will major in journalism. So far, he’s an entry in a yearbook, concise and shiny. But after many more miles, he tries really hard to think of Arkenhout as this guy in the locker room he’s known for ever: so he mentions Tracy, the girlfriend in the home town, who’s a gymnast and dark, and how they get it on in the bleachers at the giant waterfall with coloured lights.
He deserves a whole life story in return, so he thinks, but he’d be appalled if it turned out to be too foreign.
Arkenhout just says he’s going to some Tampa suburb to be a schoolkid, which he’s obviously done already. He doesn’t have anything easy to say about home or parents. He particularly doesn’t say out loud that he will learn America like a lesson because he is good at languages - not just neat sounds from a clever mouth, but the ability to listen to how people don’t say a thing straight and then repeat it.
Goodman says he’d like to stop off before Tampa, pick up a bus the next morning. Arkenhout reckons he’ll do the same. Just this once, it’s not what everyone expects him to do; that’s the whole attraction.
The bus draws into a station dressed up with bits of white column and brick siding. The boys pull their bags out of the belly of the bus. They talk a bit about that green flash in the sky you get in Florida, so they’ve both heard.
Technicolor evening. Cracker eyes. Small motel, old pink, two double beds, TV with the colours shifted like a very old 3-D movie. Bathroom with crumbling mosaic and a barrier like a police line: this side sanitized for your protection, the rest at your own risk. Palm trees in a very little motion, a shine more than a move.
Goodman talks about New York. ‘You meet people who matter,’ he says, which must be his father’s phrase. He’ll work out where the career paths run, get invited, although he’s not sure to what.
Arkenhout starts to think he’s carrying his own name - Martin Arkenhout - like a too-big case your mother packs, which he’ll sooner or later have to lug home to Holland.
He remembers to call his new American family in Tampa to say he’s missed the bus, been delayed.
He pays serious attention now. Goodman doesn’t bite his nails. Arkenhout does, - better stop. Americans have such glamorous, managed teeth, but Arkenhout’s are good, too. Goodman doesn’t say much about his home town because he’s leaving it. While he’s in the shower, Arkenhout thumbs through his diary, finds an orderly list of emergency numbers, home, relations, doctor. The credit card that paid for the motel room is in his father’s name. So that’s how Americans do it, Arkenhout thinks.
Goodman comes out of the shower in white socks. He lies down on the bed, brown and naked, and he smiles. Arkenhout notices the sharp side of his belly muscles.
Since they’ve only just met, since they have nothing in common except not knowing each other’s stories, it is natural to ask about parents, brothers, sisters. Goodman’s are all in one house in a clean, small, distant town, not unlike Arkenhout’s small town, except the Dutch are by the dunes and the sea. ‘My father’s a doctor,’ Arkenhout says, as though that meant much more than a profession. Goodman has a brother and a sister, but he says they’re ‘way heartland’.
Arkenhout is curious about everything. He learns the motel first. Outdoor flamingos, paint bruised. An old apple of a woman, brown and soft, running the office; she has a gun just showing in a desk drawer. Rooms like boxes. No questions asked, or even contemplated, once the credit card runs through the machine.
Once, in the night, he thinks Goodman is watching him. He pretends to be asleep.
The next morning is smotheringly hot.
Arkenhout can barely hold his list of questions, and Goodman now wants to tell: or at least to brag a bit, to instruct the foreigner.
They eat grits for breakfast with eggs. Arkenhout manages. Goodman starts laughing. ‘I never ate this -‘ and Arkenhout catches the waitress’s judgemental eye - ‘stuff before,’ he says.
The bus seats stick to bare thighs. Goodman explains New York like a tabloid and a guidebook. Arkenhout listens, but he also watches the light show of sun and tangled branches through the windows.
Goodman is suddenly impatient. ‘This sucks,’ he says. ‘We should rent a car.’
‘I don’t have my licence,’ Arkenhout says. ‘Not with me.’
‘I’ll drive,’ Goodman says. ‘They won’t rent to a teenage alien.’
‘OK,’ Arkenhout says. To himself he says: ‘I was a Teenage Alien.’ He likes the sound of it.
He’s told his sponsors in Tampa which bus he’ll catch, but getting a car sounds like much the same arrangement, only with a welcome bit of elastic in it. ‘Cool,’ he says, experimentally.
At the next main stop, the boys quit the bus and Seth Goodman, boy advocate, tries to talk Hertz into giving him a car. This doesn’t work for two kids roaring indefinitely through Florida. But the clerk, who’s absurdly muscular for a paper-pusher, skin hardly containing the biceps, says there’s a place down the road, and he smiles as the two blonds amble off.
The place down the road is the local sunset home for cars. The rate is high, the car a faded Taurus, but the credit card solves everything.
They swing out of town on the highway. The flat, banal business of hard travel has turned into an adventure - radio on, fast breeze, open road, a sense of chances. They sing out. The weather is loud like old rock and roll up ahead.
But the road doesn’t turn into a story. It just runs under them like clockwork.
They start looking for laughs. A brown plaster gator, on big haunches for stability, rears out of the grass. A sign promises a wonder of the world: five dollars each.
The office is papered in cobra skin, a sign says. There’s a live cobra out back who sways to the sound of comb and tissue paper, and raccoons in cages, with clever hands.
‘I saw this jungle before,’ Seth says, checking out the skimpy bushes. ‘Saw it on Star Trek.’
Arkenhout nods. He’s seen that show.
Under the boardwalk, in the muddy pools, a couple of corrugated things shift. One hinges open on great teeth, yawning. The place smells of inattention, not like home, not for either boy.
‘They’ll chew you up so your Mama won’t know you,’ a man in overalls says helpfully. ‘You want to feed them?’
Goodman tries out some hogcall he once heard from a TV weatherman. Nothing answers. He picks up a bucket of chopped chickens, all shiny flesh, black blood, sawed bone, and rattles it. He tips the bucket into the mud. A snap and a flurry and the flesh is all gone.
‘Your Mama won’t know you,’ the man in overalls says. He never gets tired of saying it.
The boys need the next thing. But the car won’t start.
‘I don’t see how the battery could have gone flat,’ Arkenhout says.
Goodman says, ‘We’ll sue them.’ He’s heard his father say that.
They push the car off the hot tarmac forecourt and on to the road. It splutters, the engine turns, and the car dies again. Goodman lets out the handbrake, opens the front doors, and the boys try to run with the weight of the car on their shoulders. This time, it comes to querulous life.
‘It’s a long way to a service station,’ Goodman says.
‘Maybe they’d help us at the gator farm.’ But the hut is locked, and nobody answers.
Goodman drives like an aunt. He never makes the main road. The car dies just out of sight of the highway and out of sight of the men who mind the gators, in a slight bowl of land between trees.
Goodman sits there, drumming his fingers on the wheel. Suddenly he doesn’t look a prince; he looks a boy. Arkenhout feels older at once.
The heat rests on the skin and sounds filter through the windows: things moving, snakes and gators, in the ditches and the swamp. There shouldn’t be blind hollows in flat Florida, and Goodman is fretting to be out of this one just as soon as he can.
‘Shit,’ he says. ‘The car’s on my father’s card. We can’t just leave it. And we can’t phone and we’re out here \a150’
‘I’ll walk to the highway.’
‘Nobody’ll stop for you. They’ll think you’re hitchhiking.’
Arkenhout says, ‘They’d stop in Holland. I think, anyway.’
They hear cars buzz past unseen on the highway. They hear the little, tentative criss-cross movements in the bush, and one splash.
Goodman is out of the car and he’s almost running, never mind the sun. He’s going fast to get away from the situation, so he can turn all the nature around him, browsing at the edges of his eyes, into a harmless frieze, a movie tracking shot.
Arkenhout says, ‘I’ll come with you.’ He can’t do anything else. But Goodman is running away, that’s obvious.
Arkenhout stands in the shade of a tree at the roadside. He watches Goodman wave, make like a hitchhiker, put up his hand as though he were trying to stop a bus or a cab. Nothing works. He’s a suspect boy, sodden, carrying nothing, in the middle of nowhere. He doesn’t even seem to have a car. It’s best if Arkenhout stands out of the way, so the drivers don’t know there are two of them.