The Darke Crusade (32 page)

(
57
) Replaced ‘ ‘Gazim!’ shouts’ with ‘
‘Gazim!’
shouts’. Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak Guards’.

(
59
) Removed ‘ (or higher)’. Added a comma before ‘add 2’. Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’. Added ‘ These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2
not
3).’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
61
) Replaced ‘men, then’ with ‘men; then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
63
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘breastplace’ with ‘breastplate’.

(
65
) Replaced ‘argument, then’ with ‘argument. Then’. Replaced ‘open and’ with ‘open, and’. Replaced ‘recently-cleared’ with ‘recently cleared’. Replaced ‘voices and’ with ‘voices, and’.

(
67
) Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’. Replaced ‘ground, then’ with ‘ground, and then’. Replaced ‘slit, then’ with ‘slit, and then’.

(
68
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.

(
69
) Replaced ‘Bow, or’ with ‘Bow or’.

(
70
) Replaced ‘now and’ with ‘now, and’. Replaced ‘cover, then’ with ‘cover; then’.

(
72
) Replaced ‘suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they’ with ‘suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
73
) Replaced ‘horizon and’ with ‘horizon, and’.

(
74
) Replaced ‘ahead, to’ with ‘ahead to’.

(
75
) Replaced ‘reply, ‘Let’ with ‘reply. ‘Let’.

(
76
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
77
) Replaced ‘upright you’ with ‘upright, you’.

(
78
) Replaced ‘marble and’ with ‘marble, and’.

(
79
) Replaced ‘escape and’ with ‘escape, and’. Replaced ‘spy and, as’ with ‘spy, and as’. Replaced ‘platform, and, as’ with ‘platform, and as’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

(
34
) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
81
) Replaced ‘
crack
and, almost’ with ‘
crack
, and almost’.

(
83
) Replaced ‘weapon, ‘The’ with ‘weapon. ‘The’.

(
84
) Replaced ‘watch and, hungry’ with ‘watch, and hungry’. Replaced ‘creatures who inhabit’ with ‘creatures that inhabit’. Replaced ‘bowhead’ with ‘stem’.

(
85
) Replaced ‘Kai alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
. Replaced ‘helpless Captain’ with ‘helpless captain’.

(
86
) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Invisible Shield’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
87
) Replaced ‘trench but’ with ‘trench, but’. Replaced ‘edge and’ with ‘edge, and’.

(
89
) Replaced ‘turn to the page’ with ‘turn to the entry’ for clarity and consistency.

(
90
) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘stakes and’ with ‘stakes, and’.

(
91
) Replaced ‘tunnel stalker, then’ with ‘Tunnel Stalker; then’.

(
92
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
93
) Replaced ‘invisibility’ with ‘Invisibility’. Replaced ‘bowfire, then’ with ‘bow-fire, and then’. Replaced ‘scream, ‘Halt’ with ‘scream. ‘Halt’.

(
94
) Replaced ‘nexus’ with ‘Nexus’. Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.

(
95
) Replaced ‘crusader's’ with ‘crusaders'’. Replaced ‘en route’ with ‘
en route
’.

(
96
) Replaced ‘identity and’ with ‘identity, and’.

(
97
) Replaced ‘question, then’ with ‘question, and then’.

(
100
) Replaced ‘open but’ with ‘open, but’.

(
101
) Replaced ‘otherwise, and’ with ‘otherwise and’. Replaced ‘Death Knight Sergeant’ with ‘Death Knight sergeant’.

(
102
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
104
) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Sense Evil’. Replaced ‘ahead and’ with ‘ahead, and’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘evoke’ with ‘invoke’.

(
106
) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’.

(
107
) Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(
108
) Replaced ‘themsleves’ with ‘themselves’. Replaced ‘splashes, then’ with ‘splashes; then’.

(
110
) Replaced ‘feet and, using’ with ‘feet, and using’. Replaced ‘battle spell’ with ‘Battle-spell’.

(
111
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘strike, then’ with ‘strike; then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
112
) Replaced ‘Lead on Captain’ with ‘Lead on, captain’.

(
113
) Replaced ‘blow, then’ with ‘blow, and then’.

(
114
) Replaced ‘consumate’ with ‘consummate’.

(
115
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.

(
117
) Replaced ‘timberline’ with ‘timber-line’. Replaced ‘breaths’ with ‘breathes’. Added ‘‘Heads!’ says Prarg.’ to parallel
Section 298
.

(
118
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’ in both the text and the illustration's caption.

(
121
) Removed ‘ (or higher)’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Added ‘At the end of combat, reduce your
ENDURANCE
score by 5 unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your
ENDURANCE
total to 1 point.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
122
) Replaced ‘distented’ with ‘distended’.

(
123
) Replaced ‘footsteps, then’ with ‘footsteps; then’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

(
124
) Replaced ‘loudly, then’ with ‘loudly, and then’. Replaced ‘his Captain's’ with ‘his captain's’.

(
125
) Replaced ‘gates, then’ with ‘gates; then’. Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slew’.

(
126
) Replaced ‘Its ends’ with ‘It ends’.

(
127
) Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.

(
129
) Replaced ‘response, then’ with ‘response; then’. Replaced ‘Nyras Timberwolves’ with ‘Nyras timber wolves’.

(
130
) Replaced ‘Lead on Captain’ with ‘Lead on, captain’.

(
132
) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
134
) Replaced ‘Kai-shield’ with ‘Kai-screen’.

(
135
) Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’. Replaced ‘bowhead’ with ‘stem’.

(
136
) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Drakkar lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim lancer’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
137
) Replaced ‘them, then’ with ‘them; then’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’.

(
138
) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’.

(
139
) Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.

(
140
) Replaced ‘yourself are’ with ‘you are’. Replaced ‘abroad’ with ‘aboard’. Replaced ‘seiges’ with ‘sieges’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Replaced ‘Slovarian plain’ with ‘Slovarian Plain’. Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘zig-zagging’ with ‘zigzagging’.

(
143
) Replaced ‘power-word battle spell’ with ‘battle-spell
Power Word
’. Replaced ‘‘Gloar!’’ with ‘
Gloar!
’.

(
145
) Replaced ‘can and, using’ with ‘can, and using’.

(
147
) Replaced ‘Death Knight Sergeant’ with ‘Death Knight sergeant’.

(
148
) Replaced ‘suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they’ with ‘suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they’. Replaced ‘blow, then’ with ‘blow; then’. Replaced ‘sockets, then’ with ‘sockets; then’.

(
149
) Replaced ‘succcess’ with ‘success’. Replaced ‘group, then’ with ‘group; then’. Replaced ‘discover that is’ with ‘discover that it is’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
150
) Replaced ‘eyes and, for’ with ‘eyes, and for’. Replaced ‘Drakkar trick’ with ‘Drakkarim trick’ to reflect
standard usage
. Replaced ‘a Captain’ with ‘a captain’. Replaced ‘Lencian Captain’ with ‘Lencian captain’.

(
152
) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
154
) Replaced ‘barnlike’ with ‘barn-like’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘anvil and’ with ‘anvil, and’.

(
155
) Replaced ‘hard-worn’ with ‘hard-won’. Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’.

(
156
) Added ‘(if it is currently above this level)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
158
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Kai Alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to
Section 17
instead of
Section 86
, and changed the other choice to lead to
Section 86
instead of
Section 17
.
Section 17
assumes that you've reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘ca, then’ with ‘can; then’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘Prarg, ‘If’ with ‘Prarg. ‘If’. Replaced ‘or you’ with ‘or if you’.

(
160
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘weapon, then’ with ‘weapon, and then’. Replaced ‘Drakkar lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim lancer’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
162
) Replaced ‘wildly, then’ with ‘wildly; then’. Replaced ‘bars, then’ with ‘bars; then’.

(
163
) Replaced ‘what's wrong!’ with ‘what's wrong?’. Replaced ‘Wake up Captain’ with ‘Wake up, captain’. Replaced ‘who instinctively you’ with ‘which instinctively you’.

(
165
) Replaced ‘Tozaz forest, then’ with ‘Tozaz Forest; then’.

(
166
) Replaced ‘The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as they try’ with ‘The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as it tries’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
167
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
168
) Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

(
169
) Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.

(
170
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.

(
171
) Replaced ‘Yes. the Drakkarim’ with ‘Yes. The Drakkarim’.

(
173
) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery
and
’.

(
175
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Replaced ‘draft’ with ‘draught’. Replaced ‘Pathsmanship, and’ with ‘Pathsmanship
and
’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(
176
) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘inate’ with ‘innate’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘Follow me, I know’ with ‘Follow me; I know’.

(
178
) Replaced ‘weight, then’ with ‘weight; then’.

(
180
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Moved ‘(Remember to erase three Arrows from your quiver.)’ above the list of choices. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘Death Knight Sergeant’ with ‘Death Knight sergeant’. Replaced ‘or your choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.

(
183
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘soldiers and’ with ‘soldiers, and’. Replaced ‘attack, then’ with ‘attack; then’.

(
184
) Replaced ‘to flight of’ with ‘to a flight of’. Replaced ‘calls, ‘I’ with ‘calls. ‘I’.

(
185
) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they’ with ‘suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they’.

(
186
) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’.

(
187
) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

(
189
) Replaced ‘failing light, and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols, forces’ with ‘failing light — and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols — forces’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘pulses, directly’ with ‘pulses directly’. Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘end-over-end, then’ with ‘end-over-end; then’.

(
192
) Removed ‘ or higher’. Inserted ‘, or if you have yet to reach this level of Kai Mastery’ into the last choice. Replaced ‘tree line’ with ‘tree-line’.

(
193
) Replaced ‘dry and’ with ‘dry, and’.

(
197
) Replaced ‘The Captain's’ with ‘The captain's’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘portlcullis’ with ‘portcullis’. Replaced ‘top his’ with ‘top of his’.

(
201
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘death, then’ with ‘death; then’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
.