out, Michael said, “This is just more sea water.” and they moved
further down the path toward us.
Captain Artimus emerged from a shadow near the pentagon
and called out, “Listen up. We’ve got some things that have to
get done. Someone here will be successful in starting a campfire.
You’ve all had a good rest since our swim, and we have to get
things going, so speak amongst yourselves and find me a team
that can focus on getting us a camp fire.” The crowd looked
around and there in the moonlight it was still easy enough to tell
who was alert with their wits about them and who lay
unconscious or was stumbling around with no sense of where
they were.
The captain went around asking for other volunteers, he
needed the pentagon fortified. Artimus said, “The walls have to
go up. It may seem like trivial work, but when everyone notices
me seeing an outrageous display of anger or resentment they
expect me to respond. And when I don’t it establishes that
behavior as legitimate conduct. Despite our situation I am still
your captain and I have seen evidence of that throughout our
time here, what was pointed out earlier regarding the fate of our
ship, has not detracted from my social station. I will say I myself
find the unsettling, get my walls built and I will continue to be
what you expect me to be and are just plain demanding I be with
your conduct.”
Chief Brosuer said, “You heard the captain, I think we will
overlook the outbursts we heard earlier, but in one case it was
true enough. She is a female…a girl, and some of you just by
your upbringing should absolutely know how to start a campfire.
Pull yourselves together!”
Captain Artimus stepped to the side of chief Brosuer and
quietly asked, “What did I just say…?” Chief Brosuer replied,
“We’re getting that team together sir.” Artimus replied, “I said I
was still the captain, I do the talking around here and you just
follow my instructions.” Brosuer retorted, “Am I not still a
chief sir?” Artimus performed a calm down hand gesture and
said, “Yes your still a chief.” Brosuer interjected, “Then I should
do what chief’s do, even now as I am nearly speaking over
you…this is what chiefs do.” Artimus sighed and said, “You
don’t understand the pressure I am actually under, many of these
sailors are still very much young men and women, and they
expect that I would just have the answer.” Brosuer responded,
“As do I sir.” Artimus felt an argument coming on so he looked
behind himself rubbed his chin as though he were in deep
contemplation and replied, “That’s why I need you to play your
part chief…just your part, let me worry about the rest because I
have people for that too.” and he strolled back to his lean-to in
the pentagon.
ET1 Sherri Specklavia looked over at the chiefs she was
sitting with further east down the beach and said, “Okay, he’s
taking this pentagon analogy way too far.” Senior Chief Fuay
replied, “Maybe if we build him his walls he’ll just stay in
there.” then he got up and started pulling the loose brush out of
the brush line. Tim brock and Tammi Melad noticed their chief
working at gathering materials for the walls and started pulling
loose branches and such themselves. Tim said, “I feel like a
beaver trying to build a dam.” Tom Norrie was just behind him
gathering materials himself and replied, “Damn good thing.”
Mr. Lees sat huffing at the horizon, EM3 Huble called over to
him, “stop crying.” But he wasn’t crying he was having trouble
breathing and collapsed. Bruce Deck was nearby and saw this
with a chuckle he walked up and asked, “Are you alright.” and
even in the moonlight Bruce could tell the answer was ‘no’ On
an impulse not wanting to watch his friends heart fail from
dehydration he walked away at a hurried pace as if running
away from the emotional swell that was over coming him. As he
fled he tripped over the vase buried in the sand and heard a
sloshing sound. He looked into it but only saw darkness, but he
smelled water he reached in and was startled by the reed which
he then pulled out; noticing it was wet he sniffed at the reed and
tasted the water. Realizing it was fresh water he sucked the reed
and realized it was very much like a straw he sucked some water
through it and swallowed, then suck some more into it and used
his finger to block the end and lifted it out and blocked that end
as well and ran it over to Roger Lees and by removing his finger
from the ends he released the contents of the reed into Lees
mouth. Roger gasped and contorted as the water went down and
he gasped out “more, more.” Bruce hauled Roger over to the
vase and he sipped through the straw, pausing briefly to ask, “Is
this all we have?” Bruce replied, “I don’t even know where this
came from I tripped over it.” Roger replied, “I just need a little
more…I’ll leave some, I think Mormus died.”
Bruce rushed over to Mormus and he was snoring, so
Bruce walked back, and checked for the level of the water by
reaching in. His fingers went down about an inch and a half, but
the vase was fairly narrow and that was likely only a couple of
cups. Roger said, “How much more is there?” Bruce replied,
“Maybe two cups…you aren’t going to die are you?” Roger
replied, “No…I think it was just something in my throat and my
heart was palpitating. Roger laid there on his back while Bruce
ran triage on dehydration victims, despite the week on the water
no one was too near death. Bruce figured it was likely the cold
that kept them from dehydration all that time, but now it was hot
dry land. As Bruce walked around in the moon light, selecting
people to get some water a cloud passed over the moon and it
became pitch black so he sat down nearly completely blind and
waited. After about two minutes Bruce yelled out as loud as he
could, “Who ever brought us the water, we need light too!”
Usually the noise from over there only became a low
roar and I couldn’t make it out unless I was all the way over by
the ridge but that I heard. I glanced over in that direction and
Jennifer and Michael stepped through the brush. Michael looked
at me sitting there winding plant fibers and said, “Do you have
fire Lyon” I replied, “Ya…I’ll take them a torch.” Jennifer
asked, “Where’d the water come from?” I replied, “I made a
boiler; Gruble, Williams, Hackel, and Elper are gathering the
materials to make three more, their getting the clay now.”
Michael asked, “What’s that for?” pointing at the half made
string. I responded, “Fishing net. You guys take this over and
I’ll get them a torch”
As I got up the stiffness in my legs slowed me down
and I stumbled a little to the boiler, Michael said, “You’re not
drunk are you?” I responded, “I wish.” I grabbed a piece of
wood and lite it in the boiler and checked the vase, it was full
enough to carry over so I placed one of the deep cups to catch
the rest of the water and placed a palm over it to ensure no loss
of any steam. Michael and Jennifer sat down and did what they
saw me doing, winding white silky plant fiber into a string, and I
carried another vase and a torch over to the landing.
Hackel and Elper were carrying clay bricks down to
the trench while Williams and Gruble were making them. Elper
asked, “Where’d you guys come from?” Michael responded,
“We found the water.” Elper responded, “Okay, Okay” as he
nodded his head in disapproval as though his plans had been
destroyed. Hackel and Elper finished the new lattice and placed
the bricks on it just as Williams and Gruble came down with the
bottome bowl. Williams said, “We finished the bowl.” Hackel
blurted out, “down drop it, there are things you might not see in
the dark.” Williams laughed and said, “No we saw you peeing
up there.” Gruble added, “You aren’t that black Mitch.” and
they laughed as Mitch sucked air through his teeth with his
tongue making a reverse hissing sound.
I came up over the ridge and found a struggling dog
pile near the vase, with the other vase in one hand and a fairly
well fashioned torch on the other I stood there. They all stopped
their fighting and froze while looking at me. My face lite by a
full flickering flame, they were stunned. Atrisia took a one
kneed position like a high school wrestler and reached back to
her hip, then gestured with a stop hand motion and said, “Don’t
you move…don’t you fucking move a muscle.” and she kept
repeating it. I knew she wasn’t armed but had no idea what her
mental state was, so I slowly walked out and set down the vase
and stabilized it with a mound of sand around it. I looked
through the stunned crowd and recognized EN2 John Hefen I
said, “Hefen…and only Hefen, come take this torch.” John
walked up and took the torch and asked, “Now what?” I replied,
“start a camp fire but don’t overdo it, you don’t need a bonfire.”
and I backed out and again Atrisia started repeating, “Don’t
fucking move…No, Don’t fucking move.”
And I backed out of there disgusted. Heading back to
the boiler, I pushed through the brush and realized the line
between the good and the lazy had just turned into a battle front.
The Captain tried to follow me yelling, “Do you want them to
turn cannibal!!?” I yelled back, “We’re just now making the
fishing net! They are all delirious, just keep them contained!”
GSM 1Matt Hidale had followed the captain and yelled at me,
“Fuck you!” The captain tried to calm him and usher him back
to the landing. Matt and Tom Norrie were both there feeling
betrayed, they had worked with me, they were immediate
supervisors and I was the one that broke away and started
making the water…they were now dependent on my efforts
being successful, which as an E-4 front line supervisor there was
really nothing new about that, the labor belonged to the E-4 and
below, delegation started at E-5 and at E-6 they were basically
foreman.
Once I got back Michael and Jennifer looked at me,
and with a laugh Jennifer asked me, “How’d that go?” I looked
at Michael and replied, “They can’t be trusted until they are feed
and rehydrated.” Michael replied, “Why do you think we came
over here…” I went over and saw the trench fire was lite and the
bricks and lower half were being burnt. Hackel said, “The other
two are getting the top half and vases made. How we lookin?” I
said, “Looks good, it’s going bad over there though. We’ll need
a log and a spear to go with the fishing net and we’re going to
need food soon, they were ready to attack and Artimus yelled
out asking me ‘if I wanted them to go cannibal’.” Mitch and
Mike were stunned. I added, “Well, I’m off to find something
that floats…”
At the landing being in the moon light after nearly a
week on the ocean floating on their backs, their vision was fairly
uninhibited. They sat around the fire they had set near the vase
and at their pentagon as well, the captain paced around the
perimeter of the pentagon and the other survivors either slept or
huddled up with each other seeking reassurance. The captain
was anxious, Lyon had responded to his objection with, ‘we’re
making a fishing net now.’ the captain understood now he was
in denial he couldn’t produce any rhetoric about how rescue was
coming soon because he himself wouldn’t accept the lies. Those
that were capable of creating fire and using it to distill water had
set their own course of action that seemed to be based on the
premise ‘no rescue is coming’; they had proved their intellect by
starting to thrive, his intellect however was called into question
by his lack of ability to thrive. He had to regain himself, the
walls for his pentagon were incomplete and come morning he
would reestablish himself as the leader by setting those wall in
place.
It was likely four o’clock in the morning when all the
sailors at the landing fell asleep, all huddled together. The
temperature seemed to change rapidly, but then I was a southern
California and had plenty of time on the beach under my belt
and I was very accustom to that it seemed only in summer did
the temperature stay somewhat predictable. Dave Artimus the
one time captain slept near the fire at the center of his pentagon,
he had fallen asleep sitting and watching the fire with other
survivors he had a trust of from their former jobs he had
slumped over and rested his head on the shoulder of Mess
specialist Robert Wildly and in his sleep had been dreaming of
his wife, so he placed his arms around MS3 Wildly and slept in
comfort.
The fire in the trench with us at the boiler site was
burning hardening more clay components and the fire in the
firebox still burned as well boiling the water of to steam which
traveled down the neck of the spout and condensed to fresh
water which the dripped and occasionally poured down into a
vase. We gave way to sleep as well Tommi and Jennifer slept
back to back, Michael, Mitch, and Mike slept in a triangle
formation and I slept at Tommi and Jennifer’s feet.
In my sleep my eyes had opened during a dream and I
heard music, I watched the moon sail through the sky as though
it were the sea. The stars formed constellations with lines
connecting the dots. And choirs sung of island paradises and
civilizations lost. There was the smell of cinnamon in the air,
and colorful leaves and flowers drifted on the breeze. The
moonlight shown on the surface of the sea like a road to a
happier past, and as I stepped upon that road the seas rose up
and swallowed me and I drifted down into purple shadows and a
ringing in my ears. I woke up gasping for breath, confused and
panicked. I sat up and saw the fire still burned in the firebox and
the trench fire still had a glow, there was dirt on my throat and
dirt on Jennifer’s feet, I figured she must have kicked me in the
neck, and having three younger sisters it didn’t surprise me at all
so I rolled over and went back to sleep.
Jennifer began to toss and turn as she dreamt of a giant
sea turtle crashing through the waves moaning like a whale, she
stood in a small Indonesian village with young girls. She was
dressed in a sarong, with a red and white floral print that
included in its design a decorative bridge silhouette. The young
girls watched the wave crashing up and around the tortoiseshell
their village had been built upon and where they had lived since
the great wave took their ancestors homes away. As Jennifer
looked at the well in the center of the village and wondered how
a well could possibly be there, the girls began a hypnotizing
dance, the beads around the ankles shook like a rattle and a
string of Chinese coins around their wastes jingled like
tambourines. The young Indonesian girls wore the long hair up
with a twist and a comb pressed in to hold their hair towered
atop their heads. Some wore light blue veils a crossed their faces
and they spun as the danced and angled the heels and ankles as